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The Final Cut by ~xxstarxx:iconxxstarxx:

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I have finally accomplished
What I have been trying so desperately for
To break away from anyone who cares
So I can do what I’ve been planning
Without having any doubt its not right
Everyone who cared
I hurt them so much
Made them shed so many tears
Forced them to feel pain
They never should have had to
I use these little reminders against myself
So I know how shitty I am
What a horrible person I have been
It makes it so easy
To know its time
To make the final cut
©2004-2010 ~xxstarxx
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eh just yeah... ejoy lol

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~Yersip Nov 4, 2004, 7:43:06 PM
excelent. very powerful

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born, broken, branded, and banished;
still i live, still i love;
and through all,
i walk with fyr
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~llamafish Oct 1, 2004, 1:42:57 PM
beautiful words, very heartfelt and well written

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Desperate enough?
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~SIangelSeekingAna Sep 24, 2004, 10:34:36 PM
I like and u know why your an awesome writer chica keep it up!!

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~xxstarxx Sep 26, 2004, 8:11:56 PM
thank ya sweetie!!! :glomp:

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~kickmeiamadog Sep 23, 2004, 4:43:50 AM
Thats a depressing read, but i can understand the feelings, i guess thats why it's depressing :hug:

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~Dark-dragon4000 Sep 22, 2004, 5:22:25 PM
I think about it a lot too >.>;
But sadly enough, I don't go through with it, i just end up cutting. I don't care if I get shoved into a psycotic place for it (literally), I just had to do it. Well, I'm back on deviant. I've been having pc problems (yet again T_T;; ) and when the computer was back on I just like, gave up on everything but chatting. I finally got the whatever you wanna call it to come back onto deviant, so here I am :P
ANYwho, love the poem, means a lot to me. Keep up the good work ^__^
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~anarchisthippie Sep 22, 2004, 4:32:50 PM
How sad, but very good ^^ I like it :)

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~viperdiary Sep 22, 2004, 2:59:41 PM
Gerat words! really strong and emotional you rock! :smooch:

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~xxstarxx Sep 22, 2004, 3:22:12 PM
thank you so much dear! :blowkiss:

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~konochixkyo Sep 22, 2004, 12:14:43 PM
This is sooooo awsome!!! It's something that I was in thought about today. Very good. :D

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